Remarkable Writing

Last week we used this lovely image to inspire our writing. Our aim was to use WOW words to describe what we saw. WOW words are literally words that make you go Wow! These can be great describing words (a deep, dark forest), great action words (shrieked, sprinted) or great nouns eg. forest, wood. We ended up with some great stories. Check out this sample of our Remarkable Writing. 




A girl lived in the woods, She was beautiful her dress was outstanding. She met a cute, cuddly, fluffy, small bear. Then the trees came alive! They were surrounding her and the bear. The girl said "this is scary." But then the bear scared them away. By Gus

A long, long time ago there was a king and a princess. Then the king was dead and the princess ran into the deep, damp forest. The princess met a bear. The bear helped the princess. By Leo

Once upon a time in the deep, dark woods there was a cute snuggly bear and a beautiful girl. I was walking through the woods. I didn't know I was snuggling a bear. I shrieked and I ran away. By Luciana

Once upon a time there was a beautiful princess and she lived in a castle. She ran away, She ran into the scary forest. She met a fluffy bear. She fell into a puddle of sticky mud. The bear helped here up. The bear shook the girl's hand and they lived happily ever after. By Bella